Honest Review
I dont know how this passed judgment. Honestly, if your name werent SlashFirestorm, and you had not submitted this coauthoring AfroStud, this wouldnt have any chance in passing.
It had absolutely no animation, just bad text on a black background.
The graphics looked like they were done in Paint.
I advise you watch some tutorials, or even better, video tutorials.
You can improve a lot, if you try some actual animation.
Good Luck.