Nice
Good overall storyline. But you ay need to find a new drawing style of characters. They didn't look beliveable enough to be soilders. In fact it
looks like you've been watching way too much South Park. I alost laughed when yo were tring to mix something funny like South Park characters in such a serious setting. Aside that fact you are very detaile in your drawings. Espeially in your backgrounds. I hope to see more flash from you soon. Try to work on your figure drawing more though.
Good luck in the flash world mate!