nothing to new
hmmm . . . i guess its alright but, the only part with the introduction is the mian character voice it sounds to young for how old he looks and also the son sounds just like him and hes like what? 13? well just need to work on those parts and the music what waz it, it didnt go very well with the scene. work on the voice overs too i could berly hear them talk.
p.s. and the funny part waz when the guy waz drawing the cat.
p.s.s. also u try to hard witht the voices too on some of them like when the guy said "lets go" he sounded over dramitic work on that and some other parts too.