Reviews for Story of Khale Trailer

[Sto0g3]

Great!

You have a great thing going here. I would really like to see this develop as a series, I am sure all of Newgrounds would :P

The mile-a-minute text narration might have put some people off, though I think that its combination with the fast-paced FF music added a whole other element to the trailer, a mix of humour and extra action, even though the actual action sequences didnt happen until the end.

My only real complaint is that some parts came and went too quickly- I didnt have time to read some of the text.

Good luck with future works, I look forward to them!

[Zaradis]

some advice

This will be a excellent series if you add a few things - people tend to love action sequences here so if we see our hero getting into a tussel every once and awhile that would be great

Goku syndrom this something alot of animations do the hero always gets stronger and stronger after every fight that isn't realistic a true hero sometimes cannot defeat his enemy by brute force but my brians - let's hope our hero gets into a battle with a super intelligent foe

The sound needs some work maybe you should get a sound designer to create custom work for you so it adds more immersion - i was thinking Final Fantasy 3 the whole time i was watching it ..i wasnt thinking Story of Khale

Your animation is amazing you know this and use it to your benefit wow the crowd with it - I can see Khale being number 1 on the top 50 for awhile

I always figured it would be a cool idea to make your viewer pick the choices of your heros destiny his win lost ratio what if scenarios would make in for a very interesting story adding a whole other level of immersiom i.e. the viewer chooses to kill hoth in doing so it has a major effect on the storyline..but i'm not sure you want to spend that much time doing that kind of stuff

Humor is always a great benefit but if you get voice actors try not to get irritating high pitch voice characters...

anyways done with my ranting i love the trailer can't wait to see more

[irontiger6]

Simply beautiful.

Thank you so very much for creating this flash. Wonderfully enticing, beautiful drawings, flowed excellently and quite creative. Simplistic story, wonderful animation, amazing characters. Best of luck continuing beginnning the story!

[Getzen919]

Ouch.

My bum hurts from all the ass this animation kicks. Rock on.

[bensfilm]

Wow...

Ive seen some good flash animation in my time, but christ, that was awesome! Its not even finished and im hooked! That animation rivals pixar lol! Keep it up, you could end up making a lot of cash out of your work. (o_o) /