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Reviews for "Story of Khale Trailer"

Bravo

Not bad I was impressed.
I hope the series is just as good.
The graphics and animation were great along with the setup.
Keep up the good work

Not bad

I liked the graphics and the animation but as a cartoon it isnt all that great. I know it is a trailer but I dont think it should get number one spot on looks alone. I'm not saying it's your fault, I bet that the series will kick ass. Its just that I dont think the trailer should get as much praise as this one is.(as the guy before me(or close to it) said)
But other then that...

"Dude u rock like totally rock !!!11!1!11!!11!!!11 omg best animaton evr. 5555555555555'd"

Nice job.

Um.

Dont use sound effects from warcraft.
they dont sound good.
find better ones.
find better music too.
the music really didnt go too well with it
in my opinion
and it was too choppy
the storyline was too bland
storylines that unfold as the story goes are better
u just kinda handed it out
"He finds a sword."
"The sword changes him"
Collects crystals or some shit...
In my opinion this wuda beena better trailer if...
it were a pure battle...
between the Khale...
and like...
a shadowed figure....
kinda like the Valhalla Knights flash.
now I know there are gonna be people
who bitch at me
and say Im retarded and this was a good flash
well it was a trailer
and it was too plain
but this definitely needs to get more thought put into it
especially in story line and sound
Surprises are Good
Introduce characters as it goes
well it might be too late now for other heroes
maybe a rival
new villains shud be easy
there u go

I don't really se what the big deal is.....

I really don't get all the praise and rewards for this. It's juat another trailer to me. Ok graphics, some violence,no plot explained,introduced characters, nothing really that new that I haven't seen before.

Tailer=bad, everything else=good

Alot of potential in the series itself, but the trailer seemed kind of weak to me. It felt more like watching a very short story (or an opening cutscene... a bad one at that) then a trailer which is meant to grab attention and make you want more. I guess you just put too much information in the trailer itself. Try using more visualy stunning grabbers (and you did real well with the animation) to tell the story rather than telling us outright. Give cliff hangers and keep us asking questions. I give a moderately low score for this, but I expect that I will be giving higher points in the actual series.

But aside from all that, I can not wait for the actual series to come out. Your animation is good, the story line seems fluid, and if you can make your battle scenes look good like you did with how he killed those three things, then I see alot of potential.

Overall: Alot of potential, but the trailer was just.... ugh...