Reviews for Pickleman's Breakfast

[MetalDart]

I want more!

I have never gone to i-mockery, but seeing something like this, really makes me wonder what I'm misssing out on.

Those graphics were great. Looks like it was just torn out of a comic book or an animated cartoon on television. I notices that you use some aftermath shots, showing what happens after the blow, instead of the actual punch itself. So, only improvment I could suggest is more character movment.

I liked the dong in the background. It seemed to make sense with the flash. Man can't get out of breakfast with lyrics, "There's no easy way out." It was good background music, but it felt like it needed to be more upbeat in places.

There was some violence, but not in a bloody way. More of just showing someone getting hit, and the bruises they recieved. It was some comical violence, and with a character like this, it should focus more on that.

Good humor, but it didn't revolve around humor. Just the character itself was funny. A pickle man? That was unexpected, and I found myself laughing at it.

Overall, good flash, but I wanted more. That may be asking too much, but I feel that with your talent, you could do anything. Responses highly appreciated.
Grade: A+

poxpower responds:

Thanks for a detailed review dude, its not often that people take the time to actualy say things. Yeah I made the movie before I got music for it. I dunno, I could have put some Korn over it or something to please the kids, but I like that 80's song.
But you're right, its a little weak for the flash.
Anyways sure I could do more but. Gah. Every time I just start off with something too big and in the end I'm always too lazy to finish it fully.

In conclusion: I should stick to comics, except I should draw better.

Animation of this kind is infinitely tedious. I'll copy Synj next time :p

[Septenary]

Excellent animation.

This was an awesome flash project. The idea is great and creative, and the animation is fairly smooth and intricate. Details and good graphics made it very entertaining to watch. However, sometimes the background seemed a bit out of place, and the music wasn't to my liking. Sound effects would have been nice. Overall great work.

[wizardman]

Really cool

Well, I have to say that it's pretty much impossibly to watch on high quality. Still, this flash was awesome. The graphics were reat, I love the comicky feel of the flash, the music went along perfectly with the whole concept, and I really love pickles, so my love for this flash is also subjective. That being said, the lack of dialogue hurt the flash a bit, and putting pickles and oatmeal together really does not sound appetizing at all.

poxpower responds:

Get a better computer.

What would you have him say anyways?
"HMMM I WILL EAT THIS BOWL OF OATMEAL"
"OH NO I AM BEING ATTACKED"
"AAARGH"
"HORRAY"

:o

[RageinCagein]

dag yo

lol i can tell you read alot of comics, just by the way the thing looked. The thing was animated really well dude but the only problem i have is when the dude did the punch that shattered the guy why did you use the knuckles in the middel of the finger insted of the big onces closest to the hand. Just curious but the thing was still cool :)

poxpower responds:

It looked that way to you?
Maybe I should check again. I don't remember that.

In any case, Pickleman's mighty knuckle can defeat all.

[GenesisXC]

That was so funny

That was funny! Though the sound kind of got boring after awhile, the artwork is really, really good! I loved the details as well... Of course, the only interactivity is pressing the start button, but I didn't really care about that (they were sore from playing that Moron Marathon game ;) and I really enjoyed the movie.
Awesome work!