Excellent. But...
The only thing I found lacking were subtitles. Admitedly, the sound IS Excellent (fave voice actor from Xin) but since it's really integral to knowing what is going on, I'd have like to have seen some subtitling options, or made them a bit more obvious, cause I didn't notice any.
Extra points given for the use of the bible at the end, that was really lovely. I had to redo the shooting scene because I only had a touchpad. The twist at the end, it wasn't entirely expected, but it was hardly a suprise. It was a little short compared to the biggies like Fasco and MoTaS, but they also don't have as much of a storyline as this piece.
I was a little irritated that the girl didn't make it. I was kinda looking forward to possibly have to give her directions and work together to solve some of the puzzles.
I was kinda wondering what the heck was with the finger though? That was just plain weird.