last reviewer = idiot
He gave you a 3 because he dislikes clowns and sad stories, and wrote a review full of terrible spelling errors saying that it was good but hes still giving you a 3 basically. My only suggestion on improvement for this flash would be to have some of the guitarwork a little better. The overall feeling and melody of the acoustic guitar was good, but it felt as if it were being improvised on the spot, and therefore some of the notes were "off". Good stuff though anyways!
Wow! The Beautiful Triangle & Square! Perfection!
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As a long time viewer of your flash films, I must say u've come a long way & kept improving ever since your breakthrough classic, "Edge of Darkness". 1 thing that used 2 piss me off was that I couldn't stop or pause your flashes 4 a moment while somebody called me or I felt the urge 2 piss. I'd have 2 hold it or shut your flashes down & start over & let me tell ya, your flashes run quite a bit 2 long 4 that. I luv the length but that's quite sum time 2 c over & over again when u want 2 c the last min. Now u have a stop & play button so I can go do other stuff & pick up where I left. YES! Oh so beautiful. Thanks. I needed that 1 but seriously I think this is also your 1st technically perfect flash.
Yes, I said PERFECT! I know, that seems like such a coat tail riding thing 2 say but it's the truth, the whole truth, & nothing but the truth. Your other 3 classics, Edge of Darkness, Composer, & Chillz while classics had at least 1 small thing 2 pick at 4 fivolous reviewers who luv u.
Chillz had some sound issues at certain points (who cares). Composer had that weird unexplained attacker. (again, who cares). Edge of Darkness was gross but who doesn't luv violence.
Now 2 get back on point, this flash is perfect. The sound is excellent and totally fits your minimlist style u've used n the previous stated classics. The B & W is back n full effect & rocks though I hope color will 1 day shine again 4 another flash classic tale.
Great emotionally touching thought provoking story & well defined characters that seem 2 have become your specialty.
The only thing that can possibly be picked at by whack reviewers is your 11 min length but that's really a plus & long flashes r apart of what u do as an artist so they can take it or leave it.
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1 thing b4 I end this is that your flash is rated 17 & up 4 no reason. It's not a problem becuz u will still recieve a lot of plays. This I know but it's just the whole principle of it all. I've seen artists make flashes about masturbation that recieve teen ratings. U feature sum freaky outfits & leather covered nipples & u get a mature rating. That's a lil unfair if u ask me. I'm just saying. If u ever feel an impulse 2 complain, please do so.
Oh yeah, I luv the Composer cameo at the station.
wow...
that...really made me depressed...thank you...i enjoyed it...
Wow
Great job, his only happiness, a balloon.
really cool!
as the Composer walked bye i was slack jawed!
the sad endings are getting to me, but they are still bringing a smile to my face mid-movie, which is still really cool, you really should make more, the story lines are perfect!