last reviewer = idiot
He gave you a 3 because he dislikes clowns and sad stories, and wrote a review full of terrible spelling errors saying that it was good but hes still giving you a 3 basically. My only suggestion on improvement for this flash would be to have some of the guitarwork a little better. The overall feeling and melody of the acoustic guitar was good, but it felt as if it were being improvised on the spot, and therefore some of the notes were "off". Good stuff though anyways!
Sad story
FIRST of all, don't look at the Overall score, it meens nothing. Cause it is a sad story with litlle descriped in the last 3 points, you do not get a high score. Look at the graphics, that'll bring a smile to your face.
A lot of people like this submission, in the fact that the graphics and animations are great. Well they are very well done my compliments. Only the thing is that I do not like the way the background does not fully support the story. If he is sad, it doese, but when he's happy, you hardly can tell the difference. You should watch it in the first 4 minutes and you'll get my point.
I am more someone who likes happy stories and dislikes clowns, so it's a bit of personally feeling to, no offence.
Dear Artist, you are a great animator, when you make a Happy storie some day, pact with some action (not the leather action as in this movie), send me a email, I'll gladly revieuw it again.
stunning, utterly stunning
have so say the quality of newgrounds submissions keeps getting higher, this will be the third time in two days i will have said best looking flash i've seen
anyway if i could make some small negative comments, the two buttons in the left hand corner could have been less obvious, or even better rollovers, they were just a little to obtrusive, also the movie did seem to lack alot of flow it did seem like a collection of scenes, ending in a final scene, some music joining the whole thing into one flowing masterpiece would have been nice
anyways, keep up the good work
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Most excellent
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Wow. That was a really sad story.
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Anyways, good job on the Flash. The production values on this piece were very high.