Beautiful artwork
Cute story and incredibly smooth animation and character drawings. You chose a good song for this animation. I can't really think of anything to critique,except for the length of the necks, but that went well with the style of animation you used, so I guess that wasn't a critique at all. All in all, very nicely done. Cheers.
Liked It
That was preaty nice, news paper up side down hehe. awsome.
That's Nice
Man this is a great animation in the way of the art. Smooth and Refined. The story is great too, even though it is really simple.
5 from me and 2 thumbs up.
hmm
i cant help but notice that on the last time the girl gets on the bus, she takes her notebook with her, but when the guy walks over its on the bench. and also, on the last page of the notebook it says "your newspaper was upside-down" in chinese (i didnt read just the english im chinese) but the characters look african-american. the music was also in french. im all for diversity but i dont think this is the way to combine races lol. but overall it wuz a brilliant piece.
Neat
Wow, surprising that this only got a Daily 2nd! Excellent work!