AWESOME!
I really liked it and how the terran had different armor :P. The only problem i had was that the accents were too British and not enough Texan. We've all grown too fond of that over-exaggerated Texan accent :D.
Reviews for "StarCraft: Alliance"
Great work
I enjoyed it
Another Great Installation of your series.
Ok it was great to watch, your animating skills are sure geting better. Good to see you took some advice from the last one, the voices this time sounded a lot better. There is still room for improvement however, i might be harsh but i will reserve my 10/10 for the last part hopefuly. As i said last time i think theres too much talking, your still spelling out everything. Weed out some of the dialogue and the movie might seem a bit more natural. As you see in movies, quite often a meaningfull look can convey the same message without actually saying anything. An example when the terrans are preparing for the protoss fleet. They don't really need to say they are preparing for the arrival and its going to be in 10 minutes, you could just show the SCV working on the turrets and the commander overlooking, then show the commander look into the sky with a telescope and see the fleet advancing, the show him sweating.Another minor thing is improve your script a tad bit, one example "I'm pretty good, we muyst be getting pretty close to the installation"- or something along those lines. A suggestion for example "I'm doing ok, we must be getting close to the installation"- don't use pretty twice, and use more decisive words.
LogFish responds:
Another really handy review! I'll try and cut dialouge down, but in your example there (for example) it's quite difficult to have him sweat in flash without it being completely cartoony - I'm just not that awesome at animating for that. I am aware of the wordiness of this episode, but the rest don't really need to explain the zantaboan since it's done in this one so it should be lessened. I hear what you're saying though and thanks for the examples on how to do it better.
You noticed the 'pretty' repatition that I didn't, but not the 'ancient' repatition, which I did (and did nothing about heh) - I'll try and iron out everything in the next one :)
Excelent
This is a great flash movie, the only faults i found in this is the audio is a little hard to understand, and the human arn't as good looking as the humans in the armor other than that this is grade A+ material i look forward to more episodes in the future.
it was really nice.
very dam nice but their is no blood and big explostions i mean come on the ships blew up.
LogFish responds:
I'm going to try and do better explosions in the next one - so far they're pretty lame really!