YA HAY
It was ok but it look like you ade it in 5 minits well it was made relly soon because of the first page flash videos
Reviews for "Mario In Windows II"
it was ok,
But Oxygenwaster, before you criticize grammer, work on your spelling. You do not spell coming with 2 m's. :) But yeah, it should have been save. ;)
K
^^Good Points^^
Definitely better than the first episode of the series. You did a lot better job on making more interesting animations and more action throughout. The sound effects and music were good, and you had some V-Cam effects, which was nice.
^^Needs Improving^^
Looks like the framerate could definitely be increased. In the beginning when Luigi is training you can really see the shells just jump from one spot to another. Therefore, you need an increased framerate with more frames in between.
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Getting better
You're on the learning curve and you've doing things right, which is great.
Sometimes you zoom in way too far on the sprites, which makes them look bad - sometimes the sprite artists keep it zoomed out as much as possible, to make the characters look as good as possible.
The Music was better for this one, but maybe a long track wasn't suited to a short film...
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Dugh responds:
I also think this is a little better than the other in the MIN serie, but I still think its very overrated!
3.38 I think? Its too much for some crappy little sprite movie.. ;)
it wasnt crap but it isnt that good
The story sucked and the animation wasn't all 2 good either. In the end, this fails in comparison to all of the other mario flashes.
*how to improve...*
You need a better plot
There are some parts where nothing is happening... so delete some frames
Make it worth while seeing
This flash was pretty damn boring... u shud make it worthwhile to see