Getting better
You're on the learning curve and you've doing things right, which is great.
Sometimes you zoom in way too far on the sprites, which makes them look bad - sometimes the sprite artists keep it zoomed out as much as possible, to make the characters look as good as possible.
The Music was better for this one, but maybe a long track wasn't suited to a short film...
[Review Request Club]
I also think this is a little better than the other in the MIN serie, but I still think its very overrated!
3.38 I think? Its too much for some crappy little sprite movie.. ;)
(( Entertaining ))
~~REVIEW~~
This was entertaining, kinda funny aswell, i like the animating of it and it was fun to see, i have not seen the others but this will make me want to, i like your style and the characters were neat, so nice job on this.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would suggest some compression.
~~OVERALL~~
Funny and entertaining animation.
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it was ok,
But Oxygenwaster, before you criticize grammer, work on your spelling. You do not spell coming with 2 m's. :) But yeah, it should have been save. ;)
ok, but
some of the animation was cheesy and went to fast and you have to watch the grammer. it should say, "mario i'm comming to 'save' you not im comming to 'safe' you
Looks good
it never stops amazing me when people can take one thing at put it where it don't belong. and it was cool to see that the newgrounds page wasn't like a year old or anything. Good job
Thanks! ;)