... you really want me to tell you?
it wasnt bad.... i like the growth of feeling during the story. i also liked the emotions that was being played through the story. it went really well with the story. the only thing that i didnt like about it was that there was too much drama in the story, i mean, im a drama person like that, but everything in the story (after the part where luigi dies) was sad. it felt like thats all you were basing the story on. another thing i didnt like was the way you made EVERY SINGLE little detail the most important thing in the world. the music made it sound like that anyways. other than that, it really wasnt bad. just dont make it so that everything is a bad thing. there was too much sadness in it. i did like the humorous game over in the end though