Well...
That was possibly the most depressing series I've ever seen on Newgrounds.
You definitely have a sense of drama, which works for you mostly. The one thing I've noticed throughout the series is that it seems to go way too slowly; several times I've wondered why it was taking so long. Don't get me wrong, you do know how to tell a story, but I think if you mixed in a little more upbeat action or humour every once in a while it would do the series a world of good. Graphically, very nice, especially with the background layers during battle scenes. Could perhaps have used some more sound effects. All in all, a good series, and I look forward to seeing more from you.