It's Good
I found it more to look like a trailer than anything else. It sucks that it really doesn't have some sort of storyline to go with your artisitic ability. Henceforth, it sorta seems like a trailer. It has the work that a storyline can fit within its frame, but there's way too many jagged edges.
I did find the sound a little repetitive. It would have been nice to see a little change for the different fight scenes. Sound effects would have been anothe great asset. Otherwise, this flash is good. The mixture of the blends of graphic, art, and the anime style shows how well free-flowing you allow RPG violence to be.
In addition, capturing the little text-based'ness was tight.
Good luck.