F*CK THIS IS G-E-W-D
Wow man. this roooocks. But if your making another make like a story on it... otherwise this is one of the best things i ever seen
Cheers mothafuckas :P (jk)
Reviews for "Dendyn Dynasties"
holy
mother of all nice flash pieces great job (Y)
wow....that was your first submission?
i'm blown away.you're slyle is great lovely chose of music i think.and the characters are great except that forest gaurdian.But really i think i'm gonna hear alot of good about you
ps: furry's rule
Great work.
First let me start by saying that you do not have to limit yourself to the 5 MG restriction as most authors do, contact Tom Fulp in person ( it may be hard, but it works ) and any good movie above 5 MG that deserves it’s size, will be submitted by him, with all your comments and be the same. There have been flashes hosted on NG as big as 12 MG so if you contact him, you don’t have to follow this restriction which is meant to stop regular people from submitting oversized bad flash that only take up space.
And now for the movie, it was amazing. Every single part of it was a joy. The visuals even though you claim are limited, were mind blowing. Great Frame by frame animation. Beautiful drawings. It was amazing in every step of the way. The feel of the action was clear, lots of guns firing and people smacking with wands. Not to mention the interesting characters and well thought out plot. The detailed characters, the intro which sound like what was done in “Wink: the game”. You could use some voice actors but it’s not that big of a deal. The plot integrated well and gave meaning to the whole movie. Sound was phenomenal through out the movie, from the text part to the actual movie. No doubt music was great and synchronized well but voice actors would really help this movie be better. Especially during the text bits. Violence was easy to find, but being a cartoon with furry animals it didn’t feel very violent. Which is a good sign because it’s “pretend” violence, a child will enjoy this for the characters, while an adult will prefer the hints of violence and story line. On our side there wasn’t much though, there was a play button and a scroll between the text. Which is more than enough but more isn’t always less, a couple more buttons of different options would do well. As for laughs, it wasn’t bad, a couple looks that were meant to bring you a smile so that’s good, so generally, a great movie, and remember, you aren’t restricted by size.
Now after that rather general expression of the film we move to details, I know many authors enjoy a constructive critic and so they shall have.
Graphics: 9, absolutely great, the animation was fluent and smooth and quick. For an action movie it looked perfect. I do think you underestimate yourself, your animation is superb, and so many other artists can’t hold a candle to you. You really are great animator, keep going.
Style: 9, Clearly an action movie though the plot was so specific I could have mistaken it for an adventure novel of some sort. It was well done, colorful and full of life. Suitable for kids and adults alike. I can’t wait for the sequel.
Sound: 8, Sound was in lack of a better word, perfect. The music fit into every movement like silk. Every motion was done in harmony with the sounds. Though voice actors with talent would work miracles with this movie. I strongly suggest them
Violence: 8, Plenty of fighting going on during the movie but as I said earlier, it’s tastefully done and not that violent. Some thing not realistic so children can watch and not think of trying it too, but brutal enough to realize it is a fight. Just right.
Interactivity: 5, Well, a few more controls would be great. Quality/music/pause buttons would have added plenty to the movie even though it’s pretty good now as well.
Humor: 3, A couple moments more on the humorous side, not many but they are there and noticed. Good work on that as well.
Overall: 9, Terrific movie, remember you aren’t’ limited by size, add a couple buttons, voice actors, and I’ll buy you a medal.
Ryanide responds:
One of the reasons I didn't use voicing for the narration was because it's interactive. It'd sound funny if you clicked the button and the voice reading the page just cut out.
Anyway, my next animation will be fully voice acted with music and sound effects...I just need to find a nice bank of free sound effects. It's a bit hard to record an explosion on your tinny little microphone headset. :p
Thanks for the wonderful constructive critisism. I'll take it all on board.
HOLY SH*T!!111
Amazing animation! really nice =D Don't have anything to mention. Everything was perfect, respect.