A few suggestions, please take some time to read
The one b4 me just got a little bit too far. Id say, its a great flash. But there will be problems with plots, in this flash no character seems to dominate. What i mean is, theres no main character the plot will be focused on. Oh yeah, some people are obsessed with those cute creatures, but i try to keep a distance.
After i watched this 3rd time :
I think there should be some sounds, of weapons, them shouting, explosion effects, etc. It might sound rough to find, but nah, thats not true:)
4th time :
The one with the beam and the "mage" furry fellas, hard to get to know what their sex is >.<
5th time:
This thing reminds me Final Fantasy, from some point of view
The music couldve been less childish, its not a 2D sprite movie :)
6th and last time - The trio , b4 the "Eddy" From Tekken Style Green Furry fellow, look , uh awful. Especially the guy with the sword on the right. >.<
Get a few friends to help you with the voices for the other series, you'll need 'em.
:) Thats it. And , dont get so blah wtf i rule i own and stuff, cuz i saw lots of many better artists and works than this. However, and fortunately for you, you seem to have a potential, and if you use it well, those series, if there would be any next ones, would be in my opinion, and here predicting , one of the best series on Newgrounds.
I really hope that was just a trailer, of your skills in your next flashes.
Regards,
Spoony
