OH GOD!...were to begin....
(i would like to point out this is my review on XIN as a whole(1-18))
when i began watching this i was bored to tears...little to nothing of a story, fights that were out matched by moving scribles, and graghics whos only plus was that it had "patenchal". I had only a slyt intrest in it, untill ep.10...this is were "the plot thickns".But the story is only given in little hints that were easly swept aside by crude(but inproved) fights. Then around ep.15 both the story and the confontations became intoxacting in the sence that the characters began to grow. the meaning behind the fights made them all the better. in 17 and 18 the justafications of the evils became relized(the pillers and Dimir). this shocked me...all to often in storys the is a "faceless" enemy that admits his malce making the hero all the more empowered by the viewer to play his grand(and often shalow)part. the reality of it is no villin sees him/her self as such. relizing this not only gives more meaning to the story, but gives greater meaning to the Hero's resolve.
This type of wrighting can be sutle but extremly dificlt to put into a developing story. This what i adore most of the story and beleve it is you to be an incredable wrighter for it.
Why i gave Humor a 10 for 1 line...
XIN:"Maybe I'm just the kind of guy who's meant to stay in the background"