Absolutely brilliant...
Okay it actually took me a bit to get myself to sit down and watch this what with me writing my own series and all, I admire the work done on this.
I had actually watched the first couple episodes a while back and taken a light interest, then one day I actually sat down and watched the rest of it up to this point and I must say this is impressive. I'm sure you don't get this a lot but here is my review of this:
Graphics - (10): Although I will admit the drawing needs some improvement characterwise, its still pretty damn good.
Style - (10): I really enjoyed the storyline although for a while it had a bunch of holes in it that didn't really make sense however the last couple episodes shed some light on the subject and it all came together quite nicely.
Sound - (10): Excellent music and fighting sound effects you can't top what you've pulled off on this.
Violence - (10): The fights were really awesome especially the last fight against that bastard Dimir, but it all came together for me when XIN used the boneshredding technique in a corkscrew punch. That was just awesome to the max!
Interactivity - (5): This really doesn't hurt your overall score at all really and I've not really much to say here.
Humor - (9): A few funny parts, Zumi getting through a couple punks on her own, a guy's head caught on fire and much more.
And last but not least:
Overall - (10): This really deserves a standing ovation (that and I'm a huge fan of almost anything anime) I loved the series and will now add you to my list of favorite authors. I don't normally say this a lot...well as of late...but my hat is off to you gentlemen.