This was astounding.
If flash should be used for anything, this is it. This site was designed for flash artists to display their work, and your work is astounding. The stark juxtopositions of symbolism in your flash makes me happy that I wake up in the morning. In the limited amount of room you have to create this, this deserves top 50.
Sadly...as we all know, the problem with art is that the critics are humans--- there's a problem there. The average Joe on NG isn't interested in art so much as humor that appeals to their most basic senses. I doubt many understood your flash. That scares them. This anxiety of the unknown causes them to be tards and give you a lower than deserved score...but that's life. I hope part II continues the story just as well as this did! It was astounding!