Beautiful Style
The story itself, had I not read the caption of an angel earning its wings, would of been hard to follow, so you may need to develop a bit there. On the other hand, you have an amazing style, and a unique ability to combine humor (comic relief) with depth. I'm very very very impressed by this, it's an experiment you should continue to dable it, 9 out of 10... I look forward to seeing more work.