Deserving Better...
I think you need a lot more positive feedback on this. First of all, the style of the piece was, contrary to some opinions, very consistent. I loved the style of this submission. I also thought that your choice of music was perfect. DO NOT listen to some and put heavy metal in your submissions, unless you want them to be horribly cheesy. I think this is one of the best submissions I have seen in a long time, and I absolutely loved your choice of soundtrack. The song ending just before the video didn't really bother me that much. However, if it did bother you, easily fixed. Keep up the good work, can't wait for number two!