Perfected Animation, Good Sound, Needs Story.
Incredible animation, as always with you. If you aren't making a living off of animation than its a shame worth shooting someone over! Music this time, was actually good, the sound-quality too, though the volume was a bit much, and the sound effects didn't live up.
I honestly beleive that all you need to make the best animations possible is a good writer. If your amazingly talented animations had a really good plot to follow (with or without dialogue, no matter), written with as much effort towards a purposeful effect, as much as your animation is, you would have something absolutely perfect. So damned perfect you could sell it on DVD--you get my meaning. Just mint!
Keep up the good work but either focus your attention on the animation aspect or spend more time writing it. Your direction is great, your animation superb, your stories, boring.
You really are the most talented animator on NG's though, and that is saying alot. You are more talented than most real animators working for a good company, and that is saying more, so keep it up by all means!