Very impressive.
Hell, i remember looking at your prequel. It was the second ever flash i checked on newgrounds. Your graphic and animating skill is extremely good. The sound had a nice jig to it. The story doesn't need to make sense, or rather... it does make sense, i understand it to a certain extent. The style is nice too. No humor, interactivity, and not much violence, but that's ok. It's not that type of flash.
I couldn't possibly think of anyway to 'improve' this flash. Maybe add some sound effects to the character.
And just to say again, impressive animating. Some of the best i've ever seen.