Fix it up a little
The quality was great but it was too short.
Reviews for "Melon Glock"
You are awesome
I don't even know what happened in this flash, but it was awesome simply for using music from Noir and Hellsing. Hehe, I sound like an anime fanboy XD
give it a personallity
there are all those clans like the glocks, the clocks and the locks.
it's allways nice to be apart of a group but people are getting tired of seeing them. at your work "even if it's short" i can see you have great potential and are a great artist. but you will not be appreciated as much as you would've been if you'd make a unique character, a standalone, with a face instead of a gun. it's just a personal advise, i don't expect you to follow it up (lol), but just make a unique character, with an own story (, a face and a voice) and with your drawing capacities, you ONLY will be getting positive replies.
good luck
good but werid
good
That was it??
Graphically and musically it was alright, but otherwise was a complete waste of *fapping* time. You go girl.