Spectacular!
Not only does this flash have amazing visuals and seemless frame by frame; it manages to have this and be optimized. This flash reaks potential and I want to be there when it blows through the doors of big time. This is one of the few submissions on newgrounds that displays talent on multiple leves, for not only does it look good, have good sound and a pleasant filesize, it also has a story with a backbone.
The only thing that i can tell you to improve on is do some touch ups on the fast scenes, they seem a little choppy. One other thing is you might want to soften the bg music when he is talking, it should be an efforted task to try and hear everything, but that is just a real fine problem.
I commend you on an excellent flash, and hopefully soon to be an excellent series.