great
it was well narrated
great
it was well narrated
mocked.....
ok it was very good i really liked it just giving you low marks to make you do even beter next time...lol i loved it and gave it a 5
I liked it.
I really liked this. It's an amazing start to the full short, but i can't help but give you constructive criticism.
It seem's like a typical good guy bad guy thing. Now don't get me wrong, but i really do love these good guy bad guy stuff, but it seems too predictable. The last line was used in many movies and flashes i've seen, but it fit very well with your flash.
Remember this is CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM! I know how have great potential and i just want me to be your stepping stone to untapping that great potential.
Keep it up! You're doing great so far!
Riku
bleh
"I very much like the way you've used 3D images as backgrounds for drawn animation, it's new and looks somewhat stylish."
errrr... ever watched the cartoon spiderman? They look very similar.
Nice
Great flash, one of the best by far on NG. Keep it up!