Pretty Good
The toon wasn't too shabby. The animation was slick, the sprites were crisp, the story was well paced and Mom's voice acting / recording was good and clear. The humour, when it worked, was pretty funny. Whoever sent you Ash's lines should back up off the mic at least one hand width, it'll cut down on the distortion. The actor who gave you the old man dialogue should send out his files as loud as possible so the Flash artists could figure out how they want to level it. All in all, not bad work. I'm looking forward to your next project!