u wanna know y they stay?
because america needs drama outside of their own lives so they dont feel so alone in the world. course, if they didnt want to feel alone, they should go call up one of their friends, not go out and buy a bloody national enquierer (< horrible spelling let me just say ). liked the music, lyrics didnt fufill any deep desire of mine, but i liked it just the same. keep up the stuff hombre.
strange song
u made the characters look almost like they do in real life, ALMOST!
Nice job... iffy lyrics.
Good and okay things about this... the music itself works pretty well... your harmonic choices (modal shifts/secondary dominant chords) are very nice. Your singing isn't bad for an amateur! Pretty good pitch, if a little too hammed-up on your embellishments.
The lyrics were a little weak... sometimes they made a good point, but things like the four leaving "this town." What town? Aren't they in every town via TV? Do you mean Hollywood, or do you mean "hey, this rhymed?" And Tom Cruise? A "fool?" We should all be able to dig a little deeper than that, he's got plenty of insanity to write verses... no, full-scale operas about!
Your video was hilarious though. Bus hitting the cannons = Priceless humor. Awesome. That made the entire thing.
You've got a good idea of what to do, and you did it pretty darn well for someone composing a song, performing a song, and composing a video for it, and animating that video. That's a shitload of work. I just wish you got maybe a second or third opinion on the song, and especially the lyrics.
Thanks, I appreciate the feedback! Yes, the "town" was supposed to refer to Hollywood, but it wasn't very clear. And believe me I could go on and on about Tom Cruise, but I had very little time to spout something out about him so I figured I'd just be to the point and call him a "stupid fool" (Which is worse that just calling someone a "fool")
Those are just my petty justifications though, I don't claim to be a brilliant song-writer! :)
Glad you liked it over all!
Very nicely done.
Graphics: 9, because I found Britney Spears' husband a bit hard to recognise.
Style: 10, it's amazing how you are so talented in both making music ánd doing flash animation.
Sound: 10, nothing wrong with it.
Violence: 5, a few cannons blowing people into walls or out of a tent. I usually don't count violence in my votes so that's okay.
Interactivity: 0, doesn't matter, it's a movie.
Overall: 8. I am, yet again, struck by how gifted you are in 2 different difficult skills, your animation is fluid and there are few flaws. I voted 5.
Excellent!
What an excellent song, and an excellent topic to make a flash about! Many celebrities are really fake, and they are so extravagent that it makes me sick. The lives of celebrities are discussed in agonizing detail- what does that say about American society? Anyways, your graphics were perfect, and the whole flash was hilarious. Great job! I look forward to future submissions.