OMFG --WHY-- are you on Newgrounds!?
I'm completely agreeing with chase_dailey. WTF!? You are FAR TOO GOOD for NG. These graphics are amazing. In my opinion, it owns Littlefoot and Hanged Man's Elegy's graphics 5x in the ass. I can't wait until this is completely made, but seriously........you COULD get SO MUCH CASH for this. Work somewhere like SEGA or some big corporation and I bet you could make bunches off this line of work.
I sound like I'm praising you too highly...yesh...but oh well. OH. I do have one form of criticism though--in the beginning, the graphics with grey-scale were kinda >_>, but obviously I'm impressed by the rest of it. The preloader...me likey. :P