I'll give you good review for a hard working guy
I. Review
Pros.
1. The implausible graphics were intense, and I liked the way you put the laser scroll on the blue words. It created an atmosphere of pure suspense. Your pixels and framing dramatically improved from your last one and if you made it a movie, it would've sold out. However, you'd interfere with the copyright of Sega, tough luck :P.
2. Suspenseful and fast paced. That's your second strength. You never revealed too little nor too much, and it was just enough to rouse our thirst and curiosity.
3. I liked the way you used the original sonic style instead of improvising it into a "weird" kind of sonic. I've also seen you employ most of the characters, too.
4. Unique style, and you have better grammer than most people on newgrounds, that's saying something!
Cons - unfortunately, nothing is perfect, and try not to scream your head off if you don't disagree with my points. This is most "opinion" than fact.
1. The music... was it originally "squeaky" or was it supposed to be like that? I'm not too sure, but I'm sure a lot of people have already told you that it was... uh... how should I say it without hurting your feelings... I think you know what I mean...
2. Fast paced and everything, but your sense of distance is a tad bit inaccurate. For instant, in your outer space scene, if you're riding in a car, the dense poles close to your car would be a blur, while a fence no more than 100 feet away, wouldn't move "THAT" slow... the distance might need a bit of adjustment. Then again... I'm not sure...
3. If you adjusted the camera angle into sonic's first perspective and made it into a sort of "roller coaster" thing like in polar express, we would've "felt" the speed that sonic did more than you made it seem.
4. I can't seem to find a story in this... any decent flash would need a plot! You also need to imploy conversation and dialogue, not just endless fighting between two characters. Yes that would work for a while, but not in the long run. You need a beginning, climax, and a decent ending. You have the basis, but you might need to add a bit of spice and flavoring to that.
Anyway - that's for the pros and cons.
II Questions.
1. What happened to Knuckles and a lot of the characters you left out? Or do you not want to spoil anything? :P
2. How long exactly did it take? Are you going to make this into a series, or is it just going to be a long ass flash?
3. Are you going to put in usages of the Chaos Emerald?
4. Can you translate that into Japanese or other languages? That would be awesome!