Not bad in fact i like it
yeah it was pretty good and i really like the twist at the end that was great but, a couple of things bugged me with the story which you may or may not have noticed 1. the way the dog stabbed the doctor before he broke out of the chains 2. i don't know how things work where you live but generally dogs are fixed at the vets not the hospital and 3. no loading screen those are just a few things that i think would make this pretty good flash into a great one