Liked the narration, should do this professionally
...that is, if you don't already.
The only thing i can suggest is not letting your breaths be heard before you speak. Also, your play button was extremely hard to find, i had to
right click to get it to go.
Everything else was fantastic!
Dude
Wow..... Just excellen. Every scene was, perfect. And that " but wolves really are stronger" line at the very end was an excellent conclusion. Awsome
wow
that was very good. i enjoyed your version of the storyline very much; it was really unexpected. well done.
Lovely
I love this take on the clasic story the wolf wins yay but that uncil hes a little creepy making her ware a that wow
Very aesthetically pleasing
The graphics were unbelievable. Really made me realize the capabilities of flash. Good work