nicely done
Very cool. I've always liked Grims fairy tales. I hate it when people try to rewright stories to give them happy endings. After all thats where the word grim comes from. Maybe next time you could do the orginal Cinderella. The verson with the dead mother, the cutting off of body parts, and the birds that peck people's eyes out. that would be cool.
Wonderful, but work on writing style
This flash was AMAZING, especially the graphics. You had a lot of great ideas and a great story. However, you may want to work on your writing of the narration a bit. It was writen a little too flat out, if you know what I mean. For example, instead of saying "The wolf killed her mother" you could say something like "A shriek echoed through the air that night and after one swipe of the wolves claw, Red's mother was no more." And then you may want to add some dialogue.
For example: Instead of saying "the bird told her that was eating her mother's flesh"
you could say, " 'Don't you know!' squaked the bird, 'The food you eat is your mother's flesh!' "
You can probably think of something better than my ideas, but they're just so you get an idea of what I'm saying.
You also may want to use more variation in your voice acting
Anywho, fabulous flash overall
Damn near an instant classic.
I'm going to cut past all the raving about how well the flash was constructed. When you are at the level of flash skill that you are at its obvious just by watching it. Just to be picky there were a couple segways where the editing didn't match up seemlessly, but its forgivable.
It is certainly true that most fairy tales have very dark origins that reflected the period in which they were written. Many were actually dotted with political polemics launched against the ruling families of the day.
This is different though. I hesitated before giving you my 5 (I still did though sadly I'm not gung-ho about it). It's not because the wolf won, but because of the statement that 'wolves are stronger'. This flash could have been a excellent modern fairy tale noting the dangers of evil with a very sexual subtext and the dangers inherent in that as well. It could have said that 'watch out evil is lurking out there and it is dangerous and powerful'. Yet that little declaration at that completely scuttled that point to say, 'evil is out there and it is stronger, go team!.' It changed from a warning to a worshipping statement meant to get the jollies of the anarchists and subculture types. Its really too bad. I was in love with this flash until the very end. I honestly don't know what your true intention was. I'm just giving you my honest observation.
sweet
so i take it the wolf killed the hunter...didnt see that coming...i thought the hunter was gonna come out on top in the end...
Good one!
That is a good twist...and i still love u'r stories and how u portray them! But here is my biggest concern! When are you gonna make 'The Real Legend of Zelda 3'? I am dieing of anticipation of it...and i am sure there is a ton of others out there that r as well! but still keep up the awsome work!