Nice Work!
This was pretty good! I actually felt that this was worth the time I spent watching it. However, WTF is up with the "iron corset"!?!? First of all, the concept of an iron corset is laughable, not to mention extremely stupid, secoundly, you needed some explanation of WHY the uncle has it, and also for WHAT reason did her uncle give her the corset. "When it falls off you you'll be strong"? What!? That doesn't make any sense! And you also need some great voice actors to go along with the animation. You had a decent narration, however, when you did the voices for the little red ridinghood, her uncle, her mother, and the animals, I cringed because it was so out of place. In the beginning, you need to NOT make your voice bright and cheery. It gives you a sense of false security, but it isn't worth the pain and anguish I felt when listening to it. It was very good overall, and I decided to give you a 5 since it head and shoulders over most of the other stuff that gets submitted. Good job, and keep making better ones!