Wow!
Wow, i doubt you were even trying to do this, but you got really close to the original story of red riding hood. The original story was a warning for courtisans during Henry the 8th's reign. wolf talks to red, desires red, runs to grannies house, kills granny, dresses as granny, acts like she's sick, tells red to eat her actual granny, asks red to come to bed, red undresses for bed (i'll let you figure out what goes on in bed) and then the hunter comes and deals with the wolf.
Awesome
This was awesome. Very twisted and finally a story that allows the wolf to come out on top.
Great job
I thought it was great, but if the hunter had lived you could had made a series on it.
AMAZING!!
That was awesome. so much action and violence!
it's perfect!
The Grim Brothers would be proud
I just adored this submission! Anyone who has read the original versions of these fairytales knows that they weren't written for children to entertain, but warn. Beware strangers offering sweets, so to speak. :) Deliciously wicked!
The art was amazing and went very well with the story, dramatic and lively. I especially loved the narration. I felt that the tone and flow never wavered from the appropriate "story teller's" tone, which means that even though you know what is going to happen, you never give it away until the time has come. All through the story, I still believed that at least Red Riding Hood was going to walk away from it!
Also the musical score was set at a good level for the piece and kept pace with it beautifully.
Just brilliant! Hats off to you.