DUDE.
That was awesome. I loved the twist on an old children's tail that you did. Plus, at the end I loved the music you used which is from Saw/Saw 2 where the characters always find out something shocking, which happended in this. Make more flashes like this, and I'll keep rating them 10s!
Wow!
That was amazing!!! An excellent twist of the story. I was expecting it to end the same way the fairy tale does, but you totally came up with something unexpected. Very clever and artistic! I don't really see anything wrong with this, I was thoroughly entertained.
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man this was really well made. best ive seen in a while. i did'nt hesitate at all to put a 10
woah....
wat a twist it made me hold my breath forever and the storyteller being the wolf..... a truly good plot twist please think about making more
best story ever
I've... never seen sush brilance... have you ever tought to write a horror script?