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Reviews for "Red Riding Hood"

That was a bit stupid.

There were flaws to your little story.

1) If the girl had mastered the strength to break an iron sheet of metal, she should be strong enough to kill the wolf on her own. Strong and tough enough on both accounts. The wolf would have had little chance to survive. I can see if she was ultimately scared and tired, her reflexes would be less than his. But still... he wouldn't have an easy meal.

2) Blood and flesh of humans has a distinctive smell that any human can recognize. The smell is so nautious to any human that it will cause them to gag. You can't eat human flesh either.

3) It's understandable that the wolf was a wolf-man or a werewolf. But that wouldn't explain how the bird and cat were able to speak.

4) An enraged human can kill any beast, as humans are demons in their own right. That wolfman would have stood little chance for survival against that hunter for the second round.

5) Wolfs, even though savage carnivores, are actually not predators of human beings. Not even a wolf-man would want to hunt humans over weak and easy prey like young deer, sheep, and horse.

In short, wolves don't bother themselves with time and effort over a prey that is quite strong. They prefer something that's already dead or easy to kill.

I'm quite sure that wolfman would have rather ate that cat than to have bothered it's self with that girl.

I know you are trying to create a little scary horror. But you can't really horrorfy someone when you add in a little too much fantasy.

Umm...

Well sorry Dude your Graphics are one of the best but all in all I cant find anything good in this submission...this is nothing against you, keep going on, that graphics is awesome!

Visually pleasing, though the narration is not.

This was a rather unique spin on the classic tale, and the premise alone was enough to draw me in. The visuals, including both the actual style of the art and the camera angles, were enough to keep me watching. However, this did have negative points.

Chief among those negatives is the narration. While obviously trying to convey the storybook-esque feel, the constant voice-over got annoying quite fast, and it nearly drove me away. Yes, it DOES heighten the ending. However, if everyone "leaves" before they reach said ending, then what is the point?

In the future, I would suggest fading from narration to simply dialogue. As in movies, dialogue plays an important role in sound. (the rhythem and pitch, not the actual words) The constant narration began to sound quite smarmy and "pervy" after a while. Yes, you were going for a character, but still...try and break away from that every once and awhile. Give your audience a break, yes?

All in all, this was not half bad. Not stupendous in any way (thanks to the narration) but still not bad at all.

That Fiend!

Looks like the hunter come to red riding hood's house too late! That fiendish Wolf! SOMEBODY KILL THAT WOLF!!! HE JUST ATE THE STORYTELLER, RED RIDING HOOD'S MOTHER,AND RED RIDING HOOD!!! The Children are not gonna like this!

"Fine"

Fake story........ Booooooooooooo.