Choppy, poor animation, good story
I'm sorry but the animation came out choppy and poor. The drawings were good but something kept freezing up for a frame or 3 at a time. I just checked a bunch of other flash and as far as I can tell it ISN'T a problem with my computer. Your storytelling is very good and the voice acting was OK but not really anything outstanding. Good work, just needs to be smoother...
Um.......
That was odd version of red riding hood, and sort of a needlsly violent one, but a fairly good flash anyway
Good job, good story, great graphism.
Good job on this creation. Good story, awesome graphism. Overall, a good rated M version of an old fairy tale. *Thumbs up*
It had some strong points
I'll make this quick:
A terrible plot
Gorgeous animation
Incredible sound
Less than stellar narration
I liked it.
little red
for me, I felt like you were trying too hard storywise. There's only so much that you can do with Red Riding Hood in the first place, I think that it would have been better if you came up with your own unique fairy tale.
Also, I noticed that your animation was inconsistent which was distracting. Some scenes you put a lot of effort into and it really showed, while other scenes (walking scenes for example), there wasn't much animation to show. The sound quality was also kinda fuzzy, but the narration was well done.
Your artwork is fantastic, and the visuals to narration was done effectively. Some scenes could have been held longer though.
Good job all around.