Definitely delivers the darkness.
Has anyone on Newgrounds ever done a LIGHT version of a children's story? It's interesting that Red Riding Hood is a frequent choice for macabre revisions. Even while it was still an oral folk tale, both comic and tragic versions existed. (Most folklorists I've talked to or whose commentaries I've read agree that the positive ending is the original.)
The embellishments you made to the story really added to my enjoyment of it. I would be interested to know how much you gleaned from versions of the story and how much you invented.