SO-SO!
The animation was good.But what ever happend to "happily ever after"?
Reviews for "Red Riding Hood"
Wonderful, but work on writing style
This flash was AMAZING, especially the graphics. You had a lot of great ideas and a great story. However, you may want to work on your writing of the narration a bit. It was writen a little too flat out, if you know what I mean. For example, instead of saying "The wolf killed her mother" you could say something like "A shriek echoed through the air that night and after one swipe of the wolves claw, Red's mother was no more." And then you may want to add some dialogue.
For example: Instead of saying "the bird told her that was eating her mother's flesh"
you could say, " 'Don't you know!' squaked the bird, 'The food you eat is your mother's flesh!' "
You can probably think of something better than my ideas, but they're just so you get an idea of what I'm saying.
You also may want to use more variation in your voice acting
Anywho, fabulous flash overall
Very nice
A superb telling of the old fairy tale. I never heard the bit about the metal corset before, is that new or was it in the Grimm's original? The artowk ruled, and the speech guy has a really good story telling voice. I like the ending, what with the hunter lying dead on the floor. Who says bad guys never win in the end? Great Job!
Clever
Very clever. I was rather impressed with that. The ending made me laugh (not because it was particularly funny, but because I figured it out just before I saw it, and it was so brilliant I couldn't help but laugh, because I'd been outwitted, if you see what I mean. It's not often that I don't guess an ending to a story).
Anyway, keep these up. Maybe you could convert a few more tales from the brothers Grimm. It's not often that someone can achieve making a genuine fairytale (not the happy-clappy disney stuff, but a real, pure, brothers Grimm version [cause they're pretty dark anyway]) darker than it actually is.
If I were any good at animation, I'd try working on Sleeping Beauty. Disney cuts out half the story, and I've seen some brilliant stuff done on it. I'm sure you could do a great job.
Funny
This is the best version of the red hood ever, and i mean it .............I will never think the same way about that childrens tale, by the way funny ending.