Very, very nice
This is a very nice flash, and you should be very proud of yourself right about now.
The art style and animation was amazing. I for one love the opening load screen, very well done. the animation was smooth as silk. this is definately one of the better done flashes on newgrounds.
If I have any complaints about this, it would have to be the narration, and part of the plot. Overall, the narration was solid, but it could have been better... there was no part of the story telling that grabbed me, if anything, less of it would have been a plus, as in some parts it seemed there was unnecessary talking. And as for the plot, the whole corset thing wasn't needed at all.
All-in-all, this is an outstanding piece of work. And I can't wait to see more of your stuff... Keep it up!