Jerry! I felt cheated of my patience 4 this 2 load
Wow! Lovely Film But I can't believe you wasted such wonderful storytelling and buildup and characters on a quick underrealized ending. I like the "twist ending" but the experience of how the characters got there could have been better amplified by long full-length fights like n your other flash films. Even if the movie would have required multiple parts. I'd rather 2 films of goodstorytelling & a fully realized action sequences than one film of good storytelling but underrealized action. I wouldn't talk like this if I didn't know your potential. You r an AMAZING FLASH ARTIST and that's why I know this could've been a little better but you r great. Alien Report was 4 parts & was pretty well done. You could have made Red Riding Hood your third highly anticipated series instead of your overhyped achievement. U know alot of these reviewers r either new or wrote their good reviews bcuz they r't exposed 2 your much better flashes & they haven't gotten over the intial shock a viewer gets when experiencing such high quality animation which u have done excellently but I wish you would have made fight sequences instead of just some unseen death n an instant. I have a modem & not a broadband connection so waiting on your film took a long time. I saw Moonlight & the Alien Report Series. MOONLIGHT is on my favorite flash list somewhere near the top to be exact & at one time was number one or it could still be but I can't quite remember right now but that is beside the point. The point is that u could've done a little better & I say this with LOVE and as a true FAN with an eye for POTENTIAL & an eye for GOOD WORK. Check my past reviews accept the one over that YAAFM one. See the films I've reviewed and what I gave them. I know what I'm talking about except my review over your film Moonlight could've been more elaborate but PLEASE don't fool me with something that looks cool & u say has a twist ending and ruin the overall effect with underrealizing its full potential cuz this would b a PERFECT TEN if this was a rookie's 1st entry or a sorry artist's one good one or someone else of a lower standard made this flash but u made this flash. YOU r amazing. DON'T GET ME WRONG!!! THIS IS STILL BETTER THAN AVERAGE AND BETTER THAN MOST FLASH ARTISTS' BEST FLASH FILMS but from you, Jerry, I expect better.