Nice visuals and good idea, but terrible script
You have a great idea and a nice twist on the classical story, but your scriptwriting is terrible. You use terrible verbs and all your lines are so cluttered. I feel as if a 4th grader were telling this story to me which is fine if theyre telling the original story. But for a story with the intensity thats portrayed through the visuals and music you need a better script. It was way to colloquial.