stupendous! Jerry you rock!!!
Yet another pearl! this sick twist on the beloved fairy tale by the brothers Grimm. the ending could not have been done better, and all throughout you almost had me fooled that things were going to end "hapilly ever after".}:-)
Chilling
Disturbing, actually, at some points. I really liked your depiction of the wolf, it was a lot more interesting than him simply being a four-legged canine.
Good plot
It's closer to the original than most of the others you hear in kid's books. I've read it was a French folktale with the moral being that girls should beware strangers (a.k.a. men).
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whaaaaa!!! im goning to criy!!! >< tat was so sad...
but yet realy good...
Brilliant story, completly threw me off
I was expecting just a few different events but not a completely different ending. Never expected the wolf to be reading! Shit load better ending than the original!