Visually pleasing, though the narration is not.
This was a rather unique spin on the classic tale, and the premise alone was enough to draw me in. The visuals, including both the actual style of the art and the camera angles, were enough to keep me watching. However, this did have negative points.
Chief among those negatives is the narration. While obviously trying to convey the storybook-esque feel, the constant voice-over got annoying quite fast, and it nearly drove me away. Yes, it DOES heighten the ending. However, if everyone "leaves" before they reach said ending, then what is the point?
In the future, I would suggest fading from narration to simply dialogue. As in movies, dialogue plays an important role in sound. (the rhythem and pitch, not the actual words) The constant narration began to sound quite smarmy and "pervy" after a while. Yes, you were going for a character, but still...try and break away from that every once and awhile. Give your audience a break, yes?
All in all, this was not half bad. Not stupendous in any way (thanks to the narration) but still not bad at all.