A beautiful grim and dark look at riding hood
I love the way you tell a story but the voice well it seems to overshadow some of the things happening in the story and doesn't really seem fit for this kind of story but oh well. I loved the tension and suspense towards the end, and the ending was great as well. I like the dark nature you added to the usual story (especially red riding hoods last meal, which you downplayed in my opinion, she should have been looking at the food in shocked disbelief or maybe after the wolf revelas himself she would look at the food and weep). You should make more grim fairy tales.