An explosive story
A gripping story with a ending befitting of a serious theme.
This was THE greatest fairytale i have ever seen/heard and the storyline twist kept you going.
Thats was also an amazing use of "Shithole Theme" From saw, extremely befitting for the ending and the plot twists which just brought my thoughts to Saw once more.
I believe you really have a talent here, use it and create a new epic story for us to sink our teeths into.
Maybe you can make something as amazing this from the likes of Hans & Gretel?