Awesome Flash.
This is one of the best flashes that I ever saw.
Graphics 10:
Awesome blurring, great drawing, etc.
Style 10:
Remix of Red Riding Hood.
Sound 10:
Great Story telling.
Violence 10:
Some Blood but no that much.
Interactivity 10:
Just a movie.
Humor 10:
Great.
Overall 10:
10+10+10+10+10+10
Truly amazing.
Definitly one of no wait THE best flash movie you've made. Visualy beutiful. The voice acting wasn't perfect but the song choice for the ending was awesome (huge Saw fan) speaking of the ending it's kinda like Saw and how a bunch of crap is all happening at once.
This is my favorite flash movie on Newgrounds
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Whoa...
That was sick (both meanings for sick.)
Choppy, poor animation, good story
I'm sorry but the animation came out choppy and poor. The drawings were good but something kept freezing up for a frame or 3 at a time. I just checked a bunch of other flash and as far as I can tell it ISN'T a problem with my computer. Your storytelling is very good and the voice acting was OK but not really anything outstanding. Good work, just needs to be smoother...
Sweet
Awesome stuff.
The graphics are, as you already know, completely outstanding. Quite possibly the best on NewGrounds. And this combined with the music created a perfect dark tone.
The voice over, in my mind, was absolutely perfect. It fitted the animation professional manner, and in fact the only complaint I have with this flashes sound is its use of “Charlie Clouser - Hello Zepp” (The Saw music), which bugged me as its one of my personal favorite songs thus I can’t take it seriously in this animation (but this is only a personal quarrel).
The animation was terrific about 99% of the time giving the movie a fluid feel. Though you lose points for style for three reasons. Firstly being an adaptation the story is not entirely originally (fair enough I expect as much). Secondly I couldn’t help but feel that what was changed/added did not contribute to the story (the whole deal with the corset, being a test of strength, ultimately achieved nothing). Thirdly, although the voice over was great, I couldn’t help feeling that the words he said could have been more fluent (such as ‘riding hood felt sleepy and the wolf suggested she go to sleep’, call me picky but the double use of the word ‘sleep’ in that one sentence degrades the movie).
All in all these are not incredibly large problems, its just the better a movie is the pickier reviewers tend to get. Clearly your skills are improving, your artistic skills are nothing short of awe-inspiring. But graphics are not all that makes a perfect flash.
P.A.